Positive feedback
Constructive feedback
In order to overcome the feedback, we need to edit the shots of the rapping to make each shot a bit shorter, and more dramatic, we also need to edit the rest of our shots to fill the whole music video and use a variety of shot types we filmed. We will see if we can change the other feedback points and see if it makes our video more effective, if not we will keep it the same.
- Lip syncing was good
- Really well thought out locations
- Great outfits and varied shots
- Great editing
- lighting is really good
- Good selection of mise-en-scene
- Acting was brilliant
- Good character choices
- Good variety of shots
- Good continuity
Constructive feedback
- Quicker shots needed of the male singer?
- Kanye West part needs more action?
- Lip synching could be slightly more emphasized?
- Need to make more of the argument flashbacks?
- Rap part at the end goes on too long in comparison to the beginning of the video.
- More variety of camera angles?
In order to overcome the feedback, we need to edit the shots of the rapping to make each shot a bit shorter, and more dramatic, we also need to edit the rest of our shots to fill the whole music video and use a variety of shot types we filmed. We will see if we can change the other feedback points and see if it makes our video more effective, if not we will keep it the same.
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